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Sep 22, 2014 12:11 pm Qingmin-Zhang Qingmin-Zhang "Added a reference, which includes the formal definition of Anomaly."
Sep 22, 2014 11:51 am Qingmin-Zhang Qingmin-Zhang "Previously, this page does not have the formal definition of Anomaly, I added this formal definition section so that people can understand what exactly anomaly meas."
Sep 14, 2014 8:48 pm ronkowitz ronkowitz
Aug 3, 2014 5:44 pm ronkowitz ronkowitz
Nov 10, 2008 8:45 pm makiji makiji
Nov 10, 2008 7:38 pm capmarko capmarko "YouTube link to 2001 monolith"
Nov 10, 2008 7:24 pm st65 st65 "One edit I made is to replace the word "swoosh" with "wave" (and then "wavy" in the following sentence) for the text that described the juice carton, which was supposed to represent the anomaly of regularity. "Swoosh", though it sounds like a wave, is not a formal term and for the sake of better understanding and distinction of what exactly is being referred to on that juice carton, I've replaced it with a more common word."
Nov 10, 2008 5:12 pm tdnjln tdnjln "I added the video example and a brief description of the anomaly contained therein. I also modified the position of the some of the graphics to give the page a more uniform flow. "
Nov 10, 2008 3:05 pm st65 st65
Nov 10, 2008 11:31 am rchinery rchinery "Inserted new juice box picture; modified content to refflect this."
Nov 10, 2008 11:03 am rchinery rchinery
Nov 10, 2008 10:12 am BenBristow BenBristow "Several text edits made for tighter prose. Extraneous words removed, and in some cases, sentences re-written. Editing was only for clarity, as content is good."
Nov 9, 2008 6:33 pm makiji makiji
Nov 8, 2008 2:33 pm mseugling mseugling "Moved title closer to logo to match other pages. "
Nov 8, 2008 2:28 pm mseugling mseugling "Fixed spacing before "Intro" head. It still hadn't looked consistent. "
Nov 8, 2008 2:26 pm mseugling mseugling "For consistency, inserted space before Introduction and capitalized major words in heads. Paragraph 2: Inserted "a" before "relationship." Anamolies and Rhetoric of Design, paragraph 2: fixed spacing in em dashes. Same section, paragraph 4, sentence 2: capitalized "it" and changed "a" to "an." "
Nov 7, 2008 9:20 pm kmobley73 kmobley73
Nov 6, 2008 5:26 pm ymk4 ymk4 "Added a space after the first paragraph. Changed “...but the green "swoosh" up the left sides of the cartons emphasize…” to “…but the green "swoosh" up the left sides of the cartons emphasizes…” The verb should agree with the singular “swoosh” not the plural “sides” or “cartons”. -- Changed “The forth "edge"” to “The fourth "edge"…” -- Added a comma after “More importantly” since it’s an introductory clause. -- Changed “restricted” to “restricted”. -- Changed “Anomaly figures…” to “Anomalous figures…”. Anomaly does not function as an adjective. -- Added a comma after “In Clarke's book” since it’s an introductory clause. -- Changed “extra-terrestrial” to “extraterrestrial”. There’s no hyphen."
Nov 6, 2008 9:34 am Jrp22 Jrp22 "Fixed C in logo"
Nov 6, 2008 9:29 am Jrp22 Jrp22 "Resized Logo"