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Sep 23, 2014 6:59 pm ronkowitz ronkowitz
Sep 22, 2014 7:57 pm Qingmin-Zhang Qingmin-Zhang "need author's name "
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Nov 10, 2008 7:28 pm st65 st65 "A few minor edits were made. Adjusted spacing. The text under the subheading "Text Attracts Attention Before Graphics" reads awkwardly. I therefore took the liberty of rewording that section. I've also delete large gaps of space found between the screen capture of the Microsoft webpage and the surrounding text. I also vertically lengthened that shot, as it looked too compressed and hard to discern in its smaller size."
Nov 10, 2008 6:25 pm tdnjln tdnjln "Added more descriptive text to "anisotropic""
Nov 10, 2008 5:44 pm st65 st65
Nov 10, 2008 4:19 pm makiji makiji "Malcolm: edits to simplify and clarify language; removed periods in bulleted list; changed numbered list to bulleted for consistency"
Nov 10, 2008 12:57 pm rchinery rchinery "added extra space between paragraphs"
Nov 10, 2008 12:56 pm rchinery rchinery
Nov 10, 2008 12:49 pm rchinery rchinery "unnecessary comma use; indented quotation and expanded upon it a bit; added USA Today image to support Stanford study"
Nov 10, 2008 11:33 am BenBristow BenBristow "Additional note on Bristow edits: font in one paragraph was incorrect. It was normalized. Changed video caption to smaller typeface and centered it. "
Nov 10, 2008 11:30 am BenBristow BenBristow "Paragraph on "you can read this book in a couple of hours" removed. Wrapping issue with book cover image and text resolved. Video on eye movement research added. "
Nov 9, 2008 6:37 pm kmobley73 kmobley73 "Moved extra spacing between website and F image"
Nov 9, 2008 3:56 pm mseugling mseugling "First paragraph: Lowercased "Eye Movement," edited parenthetical reference, closed "can not." Made "Reference Book" an H2. "
Nov 9, 2008 3:42 pm mseugling mseugling "Added screen grab to illustrate "F" concept. "
Nov 6, 2008 8:10 pm ymk4 ymk4 "Adjusted spacing in the quote. When the page was published, there was a lot of awkward white space before the next line where the quote continued. I added an explanation for the F graphic. I increased the size of the graphic to make it more prominent and meaningful. "
Nov 6, 2008 10:06 am Jrp22 Jrp22 "Fixed Spacing"
Nov 6, 2008 9:35 am Jrp22 Jrp22 "Fixed Spacing"
Nov 6, 2008 9:35 am Jrp22 Jrp22 "Added Logo"